Hush, I'll Tell You A Secret - Comments

Oh wow a dedication to me? That was really good and written so well and now I believe that they love each other so much cuz there really isn't anything like a night of hot passionate sex to show someone ur true feelings! Seriously this was so good! Great job and thanks for the dedication :)

Ps: sorry it took me so long to read :(

Ahhh Oh my god continue with the scene haha I'm not percerted at all... Maybe a little but it's fun! Love it so much!!!

Thanks to all of you! I promise, an update will come later today! I have been swamped with school and other personal things, but I finally have some free time so a new chapter is in progress, I hope I didn't lose any of my subscribers, love all you guys!

update soon. i really like this story

Sleepovers woo!

Her dad is mean! Haha but awesome update, so happy u did update and I hope I'll update again soon, pleaseeeee???

I love it so much!!! Please pretty please update more:)

Also, I still don't have a Louis! Anyone who has the perfect picture for Louis in mind, please post it or message me! You can even just say who you want him to look like, he is a character for you guys to develop and grow to love!

I realized that and my last couple chapters have included who is talking and point of view switches, and if you aren't sure who is talking, go to the summary page and it is always listed. In most of my stories, when there is point of view switches, I always have some way of telling that it switches. And this story is old so it used to display the title and point of view in the old format so it just never changed.

you shpuld really put whos P.O.V. it is because i dont like figuring out who's the talking.

Love love love the story more please!!! So wrong to stop like that!!!

Oh, after reading my comment below, I have something to add, message me pictures of what you want and think Louis looks like, have you noticed I haven't described him yet? So, please message me pictures! Who knows, one of them might become Louis, and who is curious about Nathan Cameron? Anyone remember kat mentioning him? Be sure to check him out in characters and keep reading to find out more about him!

Yeah, sorry about the spelling and grammer errors, I have little time in my life anymore, so, when I update, I type really fast to get the update in as soon as possible, and since I'm always on the run, that means no time to read over it either...anyway, aren't I driving you crazy with Louis? And I know you are all dieing for a giant make up scene, it will happen! Anyway, off to find some resemblance of cool air! No air conditioning with a heat index over a hundred, wooh!

my only complaint is the spelling errors, which seem to be minor typos. :) otherwise, FANTASTIC. I want more!!! :) :) :)

I do want to know more about this Louis--who is he, and what is his relationship with Kat? Is he just a friend, or boyfriend?? so curious! Update soon please!!

Wait so are her and Lois together? And poor Blade. Update soon(:

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH I HAVE TO KNOW!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I AM SUBSCRIBED AND WAITING!~!!!!!!

I would love if you updated very soon! And is louis and kat a couple? Holdom ghands and sich im confised oh well. Loved it btw!!

I like that you have given obstacles and issues for them to overcome. Love is never easy or a smooth road though oftentimes it if portrayed as if everything falls into place like magic or some fairy tale. So, I really like that you gave them some major conflict! :) I do agree, however, that a make-up scene with Kat and Blade needs to happen! :)
my only critique (and not a bad one by any means) is the spelling/grammar errors. Minor things such as using are instead of our, or missing letters in words, etc. I recommend a quick read-through before posting and your updates will read better and perhaps catch more readers too.
oh, and I am totally subscribing. Please update!

Then it has been decided, giant make up scene will happen!

Oh my gosh, want!