*has finally finished reading* and the verdict is... AMAZINGNESS!!!! i love this, it took forever to read but it was so worth it!!! can't wait for the update xoxox
Hey lol i have just read your story and i love it! You said you wanted an opinion on the sex scenes well it was okay im not saying this to annoy you cause its a great story but you May need to work on it, if you want my advice just reply to this and i will be glad to help :) im good at structuring a good story
MOREEEE!!!