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Author [SadieWitch]
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Chasing the Past
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Best Hellsing story I've heard on Mibba~
January 6th, 2011 at 11:36am
What!
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'the bird of hermes is my name
Eating my wings to make me tame'
January 4th, 2011 at 07:46am
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Thanks, and no offence taken. I knew I should have made it smaller. I thought it was going to be a one little short story. I promise the next chapter will be shorter.
January 4th, 2011 at 07:18am
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Hey no offense just giving feed back. To make you story appeal more to readers you should break up your chapters and make them smaller.
January 4th, 2011 at 07:11am
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