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  • Chasing the Past

    Chasing the Past (100)

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    Best Hellsing story I've heard on Mibba~
    January 6th, 2011 at 11:36am
  • What!

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    'the bird of hermes is my name
    Eating my wings to make me tame'
    January 4th, 2011 at 07:46am
  • SadieWitch

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    Thanks, and no offence taken. I knew I should have made it smaller. I thought it was going to be a one little short story. I promise the next chapter will be shorter.
    January 4th, 2011 at 07:18am
  • HAIFISCH

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    Hey no offense just giving feed back. To make you story appeal more to readers you should break up your chapters and make them smaller.
    January 4th, 2011 at 07:11am
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