I loves it's I wonder when Nat's gonna tell him who his real father is and apollo is a HUGE but head for leaving them before their baby was born!!! That is so messed I would of slapped the tast out his mouth
I love this story! :D I've always been a fan of Greek Mythology, And just recently slashes, This story is just plain awesome. I like how the plot is there, But not overly obvious. And the relationships between the characters, Are very relatable.
Keep on writing. I'll be waiting for another update. Hahas(;
I like how the Gods have their own little meeting places. I'm glad Erebus said what he did about Luke's magic, that he let Luke know that he's using it the way it was meant to be used and not the way his parents think it's used. That is a large group. Hopefully they won't run into as much trouble as the Gods seem to think they will. I like that the Gods don't make a big production out of their departures and instead just let their images fade. Aww, Luke's worried about his little sister. My brother does the same for me even though I'm the older one. Gotta love brothers and their protective instincts. ^_^ Go Natalie! That was nice of her to take care of the storm spirits on her own so as not to put the gang on edge before their journey's even begun. I smiled at Greg and Danielle too. X] I hope one of them will find the courage to say how they feel soon. Hope to be reading more soon! <3
i love how you described Natalie getting rid of the spirit:D and luke and adrian are sho cute:D ooh!!! i almost forgot to mention, the mark on luke's hand is awesome:D
Phew! It's only Meagan. I was worried there for a second. Danielle needs to just go for it because Greg clearly likes her too. I like Greg, he makes me laugh and I love his enthusiasm for Finding Nemo. "As they lounged around, everyone was oblivious to the set of eyes watching them through the window. Waiting for the perfect moment to strike." Here I am thinking somethings about to attack them and it's just Adrian's parents playing a joke on them. It was funny though. I like how easy going and fun loving his parents are. This is definitely the right place for Luke to be. Wonder what Erebus will have to say. Hope to find out soon! <3
You need to update this. Why? Because I'm liking this far too much for you to just leave it with that cliff hanger. Loving the mix of magic and Greek/Roman mythology. Can't wait to see where you take this story! <3
*subscribes* p.s. You forgot to space the paragraphs in the last chapter.
I truly love this story. I just found it and was like "gasp! this looks amazing" The idea of how the gods claim those with powers is awesome. and it's kinda cute how Adrian has a crush on Helios and about how Luke thinks that Adrian may act on his crush. But (just speculizing here) it would be interesting if Erebus took an "interest" if you know what I mean, in Luke, like just was kinda like "i like you, but you don't have to do anything about that if you don't want to" or something:D but yeah, just something that popped into my mind when I was reading this and I was like hey, that sounds cool. Whether you think about it or not, I still love this story:D would you mind if i put it in like an a/n of one of my stories? This is awesome and I think it needs some more readers:D