the first chapter was sooo good it gripped me in already! I really loved your art work it fitted the theme sooo well! I'll probably subscribe after I finish the second chapter! So good luck on your future comments because it think it was an amazing read! and if you could let me know what you think of my book Into the Redwoods We Go that would be sweet! :) And let me know what you think!
the first chapter was sooo good it gripped me in already! I really loved your art work it fitted the theme sooo well! I'll probably subscribe after I finish the second chapter! So good luck on your future comments because it think it was an amazing read! and if you could let me know what you think of my book Into the Redwoods We Go that would be sweet! :) And let me know what you think!
No mistakes xD well done, it seems interesting but using some paragraphs will make your chapters more strutured and it also looks better and is easier to read when in paragraphs xD