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  • SamanthaHuffer

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    This is by far THE best fanfiction I've ever read..
    I read it wuite a while ago, and forgot the name of it!!! So I went through every fanfiction on, themainfanfiction tumblr, just to find it!!!
    WORTH IT! KEEP WRITING!!!!!
    April 17th, 2013 at 12:01am
  • Broken_Without_Hope

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    I love your story, but sweetie, you need to make sure you stick with either third or first person, you can't keep switching. Other than that great job!
    August 24th, 2011 at 05:51am
  • purple_em

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    I'm slowly catching up on all your stories.
    August 9th, 2011 at 06:39am
  • drea_uhoh

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    okay i loved this story. i REALLY hated Danielle, and you made me hate John hahahha.
    Like the fact that the one time Garrett messes up she shuts him down; and John messed up an infinite amount of times, and she went back to him?! yea i hate danielle :]
    So i'm going to go read the sequel right now. :] cuz garrett is the best :]
    July 11th, 2011 at 09:54pm
  • SweetPea

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    Ending was great). Can't wait to read the sequel:)
    May 11th, 2011 at 09:11pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    awww :[
    i want more John :]
    May 10th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • MYP

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    UMMMMM I LOVE YOU.
    WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE.
    Seriously though. This story has been crazy good all along, every twist and turn of it. I loved it so much! As I do all of your stories. You're an amazing, creative and beautiful writer. (In case you couldn't tell I love your writing...haha).
    AND ALSO I HAD A MINOR FREAK OUT ABOUT THE GARRETT STORY AGAIN BECAUSE I AM SO EXCITED FOR IT. ALSO BECAUSE OF WHAT YOU SAID AT THE END, WHICH MADE ME LOVE YOU EVEN MORE. SERIOUSLY. WHAT EVEN. I JUST THOUGHT YOU SHOULD KNOW. NOT THAT I DON'T TELL YOU OFTEN.
    Caps locks was a definite need for that little message.
    May 10th, 2011 at 05:20am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    You've done it again. You've written another story that is one of my favourites. I love how happy Danielle and John finally are! And Garrett really does need to stop moping around. Good thing that will happen in the sequel!
    May 9th, 2011 at 11:59pm
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    "So i have to say this story went a long way. I didn't have a plot in mind, i just knew i wanted to do a sort of love triangle and here it came out. I hope you guys loved the story just as much as i loved reading it. I enjoyed reading all of your input and feedback, and thank you all so much for that. Thank you for reading this story and giving it a chance. For those of you that didn't like the income, at least you guys get another story out of it (;
    so i have to say this whole story wouldn't be possible for this beautiful girl. she helped me a lot through this and she's an absolute doll. The one and only Danielle, THEEE DANIELLE, known as DanielleOhhhh

    I think you all should check out her stories, go click on her name! Do it or else (;"

    I LOVE YOU. theres nothing else to say.
    i loved this story from the beginning and I was SO happy that you decided to 'use' me as your main charachter. I loved all the ideas you had for it and im glad i helped you to get to this amazing end.
    I don't know what I will do without this story...fortunately we have the sequel :) and Merika will mend Garrett's heart right?:)

    Thanks so much for everything and for your sweet and nice words. you're THE DOLL.
    I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 9th, 2011 at 10:09pm
  • BrytNshiny

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    she picked John YAYAYAY im soooo happy.
    i loved that whole chapter and the car scene so cute.
    i'm glad she picked him i knew that it would be for the best.
    soooo excited for the sequel.
    LOVED THIS STORYY
    May 9th, 2011 at 09:13pm
  • onlylonely.

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    It's over. Tears. I'm glad they ended up together xD
    May 9th, 2011 at 07:16pm
  • thescenekid

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    Awww, that was a cute ending! I'm glad Garrett finally finds a girl! Just wondering if we're still gonna see some peeks from Danny and John's life since the story is somewhat connected and all? Haha just wondering! Can't wait for your next story! :")
    May 9th, 2011 at 04:22pm
  • coast of maine.

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    Awwwww, how adorable ! They got their happy ending and Garrett is going to get his ! I loved this story sooo much, I'm sad to see it go /: Amazing job !
    May 9th, 2011 at 01:25pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    AAHHHHH XD!
    May 6th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    I kinda feel bad for Garrett :(
    May 5th, 2011 at 06:31am
  • funnynaura

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    i love this chapter. this story should be a movie hahaha. What will be happened to Garrett? I'm really sad for him :( Last chapter asap, please!
    May 4th, 2011 at 07:32pm
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    Im about to cry rn. I swear. this chapter was beautiful, every single word.
    I will be dead when this will be over.
    John is perfect.....and yes, best friends dont always make best boyfriends, totally agree.
    Loved the brother-sister part.
    Omg i just love this tory so much. Not just cause im in it...because of everything.
    xxxx
    May 4th, 2011 at 02:04pm
  • caitlinstarz

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    LOVE LOVE LOVE THE ENDING!
    May 4th, 2011 at 01:59pm
  • onlylonely.

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    SHE PICKED JOHN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    OMG. brb, I'm dying.
    She made the right choice. I'm so happy. And this chapter was so frustrating, I thought John would mess up for real and then he was so cute.
    And it's ending :( Saaaaaaaaaad.
    May 4th, 2011 at 01:18pm
  • SweetPea

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    *infatuated not fatted lol
    May 4th, 2011 at 08:49am
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