This is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Him chasing her is quite different from how Kaner is always written and I like it a lot better. :) Cannot wait for more.
Umm, I have a feeling this is going to become one of my favorite stories. I love the vulnerable Patrick, it's something we don't see too often. And not many people can write a vulnerable Kaner and it be good.
You were worried about this? Girl. I loved it! There was just enough mystery and vagueness to the first little bit. You had me wondering about their relationship and how they came to meet, how things came to be like they were and a dozens of other things. I felt so sorry for P. Kane. Poor kid, he just needs some love. The first part was amazing and I loved it! I cannot wait to read what's next.