YES!!! They finally kissed!! :) very happy. Paul got his own place! How exciting! I thought it was very cute date. I just LOVE this story!! Keep up ther great work! update again soon!!
I don't think I commented on the last chapter! *hangs head* I loved that she had some time with her momma. :) This one I loved how Ana and Emily spent some girl time together. :) Plus they finally have a set date!! yay for Sam and Emily! lol. Love the updates!!! keep up the great work!! I'll be waiting for another update! :)
aww poor Leah. I always thought she had a soft side. She just has to be tough cause she fights with the boys. :) Great update!! I just love it! Keep up the awesome work!!! :) update soon!!
aww i love this one! I loved everything about it. Some bonding time with the silly boys and mother/daughter time at the end. cant wait for the next one!! update soon!!
I love this! It's so sweet, and I like the smooth [and instant] transition from playboy to lover. I had a few favorite quotes:
Sam nodded then grinned “you know we were all wondering why you were acting like that towards her, all careful and nice” I snorted “I’m always nice, you guys just aren’t worth my effort on” Sam laughed then motioned towards the door
“what happened?” he asked and I thumbed Jacob “this nutter jumped on the bed, catapulting me out of it”
“we used to get these half spoon half fork things with our food in restaurants and then she just one day threatened me with it and it stuck”
please update soon! maybe take a look at one of my stories when you have time
yay an update on my birthday! :) love the chapter, it was sweet. I love the moments when its just them together. :) keep up the fantastic work! update again soon!!!
It's a cute story and I love the plot line but the spacing in the story is a bit off, your "tenses" are wrong some times, and you forgot first letter capitals some times. But it's good. :)