Hero - Comments

This was adorable. I loved the way she was so insecure but he was trying so hard to make her feel better about herself. Their relationship seemed really cute and really pure, and it was so lovely to read about.

I thought the layout was a bit dark and I would have liked to see that a little brighter, but it was still fitting and not distracting or anything.

There were some grammar mistakes that you may want to take a second look at but otherwise, great job!

This was bittersweet. But very good. I had an ex who emotionally / physically hurt me and my best friend Tyler is like Gerard. He'd do literally anything to see me happy. So this really touched my heart. It was really uplifting, as well. Lovely job. But I do suggest a better layout.