The Stars Lie - Comments

Lucyy Jayy (100)

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Oh G-d!! Honestly, I couldn't hold the tears in. Especially with Dylan's pleading, he broke my heart. I refused to read a story when Matt dies, but this story is just AMAZING!

March 11th, 2012 at 03:12am

honeyjoons (350)

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oh my god, i am not even gonna lie, there were tears at the end.
that was completely and utterly lovely.
words cannot even describe how great it was. =)

February 2nd, 2011 at 10:23pm

Crash Thrusts. (100)

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That was a very sad ending.

It made em remember when I was seven and I went to my father's memorial service. I didn't go to the funeral because I couldn't say goodbye to him, but this story is unbelievable. I loved it. <3

January 26th, 2011 at 07:38am

Kalypso (100)

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I cried....not sure what else to say besides that.

January 26th, 2011 at 06:42am

yellowjellybean14 (100)

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i officially hate this story, wish you would have warned when the killing happened, i would have stopped reading, everything up until that end of the last chapter made me think this was one of the greatest stories i have read and even recommended to several other reader, now i am just so disappointed in the ending, i cant even get past it to think that everything was so great in the other chapters. i am severely upset with the ending. dont get me wrong it is your choice how you want to end the story i just personally think that is was a horrible and crappy ending to an amazing story.

January 26th, 2011 at 04:36am

avenging angel (100)

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I just cried :,( and what's ironic it's that I was reading this on the bus from school with music on and so far away was playing on my iPod :( and I made it eve more sad:( great short story!!!

January 25th, 2011 at 08:37pm

bloodravyn (100)

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if she hadn't called the cops, he wouldn't have died

January 25th, 2011 at 11:04am

Dasha. (150)

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Kayla I will kill you. I swear to God you made me tear up on that last chapter. It was so emotional and moving and it broke my heart knowing that Matt died. But then I remembered that this was all fiction and I breathed a sigh of relief. But still you made me feel all of the emotions that Elise was feeling when Matt died and when she was at the funeral parlor.

I had been to a fair share of family funerals and a few weeks back I had been to a funeral of a close family friend and reading this just reminded me of that day and how hard it was for her husband to stand up there and accept everyone's condolences.

The story skipped in years, but it showed that the two of them loved each other and that they wanted to be together till the end and then through forever. This story moved me and though I want to kill you for doing that to me, I still wuv your writing. Not many stories on here have EVER moved me to tears. Good job just don't make me cry again