The Last of October - Comments

Yay you updated! =) It's looking great. I love that she's starting to be herself around him. Clearly that's who he really likes!

I'm glad she slipped into her real self around him. I totally wouldn't mind playing COD with Tazer lol. Great job and I can't wait for more. Can't wait to see where this is going to go. =)

I hope you update this soon! I'm totally loving the story!

Love what you have so far! Keep writing!

I really really like this story :) Update soon, please!

i love this story so far! i cant wait for the next chapter

For some odd reason (maybe not so odd) I feel like Toews was in the washroom for a different reason than ditching her. And I just gotta love how dorky October still is! Win for the dorks!

Can't wait for the next!!

this is good!! update soon!

Ahh this sounds great already!!! Post soon pleaseeeeee!

This sounds like it will be a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

oooohhh :) I really like this story, I can't wait till the next update!!!

I just hate how cruel some people can be to others. Loved the update and I can't wait for more. Can't wait to see what's going to happen. Keep it up

I really like this! I'm always one for a good revenge story and this sounds like a devillishly sweet one.
And I really want to see how Toews reacts to him finding out October turned out like this!

Waiting for the next one! Update soon!!

I like that you address the issue of bullying in your story.
It's a serious issue, one that people should take seriously.
Keep writing!

I like it.

WOOOOOO!!! You know that I only really started liking Jonny after I started reading your other Jonny story. You have to keep going with this. I'm really enjoying what I've read so far and am absolutely curious to see where you go with this :] It's no Marc Staal, but I'll take it! Bahahah!!

I loving it so far.
Looking forward to more :)

great start! I can't wait for more. Keep it up