A Bit Of Luck - Comments

Hahahaha.
Yes, yes he is. Hickeys are rather annoying, only because they take forever to disappear and every fucker is like, "who gave you THAT?"

And a very, very, very big thank you to you.
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ah the morning after... i like that you pt the words 'erotic and cringworthy' in there... makes it seem more realistic...
and fucking hickeys... if a guy ever tried to give me one, i'd beat the crap out of him. my friend backed me up against my van and gave me one once and i seriously regretted not punching her. the teasing i got at work was SO not worth it... but it was fun to see people's faces when i told them a girl gave it to me =)
adam lazzara is a sexy beast... i felt the need to say that lol

Thanks for the comment, once again!, Fife.
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I think with sex scenes with me is that it's like, wording and how you set it out. Like, I've read through a scene and some of the words people use make me LOL and that probably wasn't the affect the writer was going for.
And I'd die if that happened to me.
><;

it's okay, i can't write sex scenes either so i don't blame you. and writing het scenes would be kinda weird... it seems awkward. but if anyone can do it, it's you guys.

thanks for the update! and it seems odd that Burbank Hayes doesn't know about Scarlett's illness, i mean it's not something you annouce to the world but i'm sure he'll be quite upset when he finds out.

and it's sad that frank and scarlett can't hook up. *sigh* or at least not for long

Keep up the good work, ladies!

Haha, Steppppphhhh, I love you.
And I'm very much sorry for leaving the chapter like that.
But, I love you.
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OMG AT HOW MANY UPDATES I HAVE MISSED!
Can I just say how impressed I am right now?!!?!
This story is aaaamazing!
And can I also say how unfair it is to end the story with the last update like this :O
I have to go, but I will comment PROPERLY later!
X

Too right I'll beat ya!
If I can do it, so can you...

Oh, in the way of pre-warnings...
I MIGHT do a scene at some point in this story.
Might being the main word.
I've started writing Het scenes now, but it's still new to me and I'm still at the stage where I need loadsa encouragement. This story isn't exactly the sort of story that'll be all sex, but when the focus turns to it, I may produce. UnlikeKiwi face Kim.

If you're looking for sex, it'll be happening at some point in my other story Scream. Not just yet, but definitely at some point. I have it written ^.^

Thanks for the comments.

Hahahaha. I'm very, very sorry.
I'm not a big erotic-scene writer, so I may do that to you a few times through the course of the story, unless Hannah's beats me up for it.
Haha.
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This is just a pre-warning with love.
I'm glad you enjoyed the updates, Fife.

*grabs a glass of water but ends up spilling it cause she's shaking so bad*
Fuck me senseless... that was... good...
HOW DARE YOU STOP NOW! YOU CAN'T GET PEOPLE ALL RILED UP AND THEN CUT THEM OFF LIKE THAT!
You're such a tease *sulks*

...

I'm sorry. I didn't mean to yell. Please update soon?

I feel harsh that we haven't updated this in a while, but Han's been on holiday and I've had a lot of work to do.
We'll post something out soon.
Promise.
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Okay.
Uhm, in answer to all of my chapters...
No, Cobe isn't short for anything, it's just Cobe.
Yes, it is Adam Lazzara, and it was my idea for him, because I love him.
: )
That's all of it, isn't it?
Thanks for all the comments though! It reallllllly made my day.

Hahah.
"I stand corrected."
Heeheehee.

Nice.
Anyways, thanks for all zee comments.

okay i'm commenting as i read so i don't forget anything.
chapter 1- is cobe short for something? i've never heard that name before... and that chocolate cake sounded delicious btw! squee for frankie being a doctor! that's something new!
chapter 2- i like your description of how scarlett got HIV, very good. what was the picture of her iron maiden shirt tho? it had to be something good in order for the nurse to comment on it
chapter 3- oh god, please tell that boy is adam lazzara... i will die if it's adam... *crosses fingers*
chapter 4- what?! frank has a girlfriend?!?! no! poor cobe... oh and living til 30 is bummer too
chapter 5- hmm, my friend likes the wombats. that's really all i have to say.
chapter 6- mystery boy? is that you? i'm happy if it is you but i was seriously hoping for adam...
chapter 7- OH MY GOD, IT'S ADAM LAZZARA! AAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE'S HERE! IT'S SO EXCITING! I ALMOST SCREAMED AT MY COMPUTER WHEN I READ THAT!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay i am definitely subscribing now...
chapter 8- To comment on Neon.Lights comment, i think the only reason no ones had sex yet is cause it's not a frerard... can you imagine making it 7 chapters through a frerard and nobody's getting any? o.0 it'd be weird *reads to the end of the chapter* ah wait... i stand corrected *hurriedly clicks on chapter 9*
chapter 9- ...that was hot....that was hot and it wasn't even a frerard... i think adam had something to do with it. all i know is that the next chapter is probably going to kill me off cause i'm not gonna be able to fucking breathe. thank you, thank you, THANK YOU to whoever idea is was to put adam in this thing. and i like cobe's new hair color. it looks good. or it looks good in my mind =)

Well done.

Haha, thanks for the comment, Becca.
: )

BECCA.
DID YOU HAVE TO TELL EVERYONE ABOUT MY...
RULER!

Haha. Not everyone's in 12 inches.
So there.
Thanks for the commmment.
Oh, and Becca?
You do have sex on your mind constantly.
Sorry to say it, but... yeah.

Fook yeah!! Loved this story!!!!! She I told you that I would actually get off my ass and read it! xD
But anyways.
Serious Commenting.
This is an amazingly written story, and I was so happy to see that 7 chapters in there is no sex like every other story!! Haha!
No Hannah I don't have sex on the mind ALLLLLLLL the time....
Even though as me and Neenz found out you do have a little hard one :D

But all in all great job girlies!!!!
:D

OH! We could put up another chapter.
We have one.
We're a few ahead... best way to be.
Heehee.

ANYWAYS.
I luffed zee wrambel.
^That sentence looks GERMAN^ :S

Not that I have anything aganist Germans...
-shakes head and wanders off again-

Hahaha, lovely chant, my dear.
: )
Have fun doing your new play!
And we shall probably succumb to the peer pressure. Well, mostly because it's you.
;D

ag.
hello, i am spadiez.
I can sense a new nickname on the horizon ;0

but yess. (:

this is my peer pressure to write more story chant,
"MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE". ;)

but ayeee.
awhgawd.
i<3dramatique too. Im doing this new play and I just found out tonight I get paid for doing it :O
hahah, mega chuffed.

but yes.
sorry for the wrambel.

HAVE A GOOD DAY KIND SIRZ. :)

SUCCESS!
Whoop.
Haha.
Me lurves you.
AND THE DRAMA.
The drama is amazing.

Haha.
LOVE the re-names.
Wow, I'm being DRAMATIC!
Haha.

And kinda weird.
-wonders off looking confused-