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Skwahdala (100)

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"I can’t cry, yet I’m all tears. I can’t live my life like this, through these fears." All I could think here was an heroic couplet :D

Okay, now that I'm done being stupid. I loved this and the sorrow that it made me feel, it really stabbed me in the face. And yes, I would love for this to be made into a story.

February 27th, 2011 at 05:59am

Undefined;; (150)

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This was... Really sad!! I liked the content a lot, but the layout made it really hard for me to read. The pictures on the side made it really distracting and took away from the overall content of the piece. The structure of the paragraphs and sentences is really well and relatively easy to get into. Good job!!

February 9th, 2011 at 09:26pm

fallen_dust (100)

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Woah.... I did not see the ending coming, and yet it was perfect.
You are definitley a talented writer!!!

January 16th, 2011 at 09:14am

taste my dream (105)

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The ending really got to me.
Seriously, I think my heart broke. :(
It was so sad yet good ♥

January 8th, 2011 at 02:20am

hatsu-kouen2143 (100)

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But...
ADAM!!! DX!!!!!!!!!!
I... Wow!
That was absolutely amazing, just saying. But.. WHY??????
:(

January 8th, 2011 at 01:15am

sweet_blasphemy (100)

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It was sad D:
Alright, not the most intelligent comment in the whole world, but oh well.
The end totally blew my mind.
And I liked it ;D

January 7th, 2011 at 06:53pm