The Lies That Boy Tells - Comments

SpootyEh (100)

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Wow.
This story has me speechless.
It's amazing.
I really love it.

March 2nd, 2008 at 03:21am

So that's why Frank wasn't at our show! *fist of fury*

lmao.

Dickhead.

And change your fucking signature, Emilee, otherwise I'm gunna come punch you.

Aww, undeserving Gerard gets out affection. Smiley

Poor Frankie though ='[

lmao. Jimmy...

February 19th, 2008 at 10:55pm

Bert McCracken. (150)

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Mrs.Brightside:
I loved it! =D

Though the last line made me feel sad for Gerard I dont think he actually deserves it...mostly poor Frankie =((

Final point: It was amazing!=D

Yeah, the last part was supposed to make you feel sorry for Gerard.
:tehe:

February 9th, 2008 at 05:03pm

Mrs.Brightside (100)

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I loved it! =D

Though the last line made me feel sad for Gerard I dont think he actually deserves it...mostly poor Frankie =((

Final point: It was amazing!=D

February 9th, 2008 at 01:53pm

ultraviolet; (150)

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This. Is seriously good.
I love the lyrics expecially. Even if they're not strictly part of the story.

February 4th, 2008 at 04:59pm

Raindrops on Roses (100)

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you are a fantastic writer. the imagery in this story is beautiful (and not the sex lol). you should continue it, so gee can get frankie back!

January 23rd, 2008 at 05:38am

One.Of.God's.Mistake (100)

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That is amazing!

January 21st, 2008 at 10:05pm

joutsenet. (100)

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...as it captured his breath and turned it into a cloud of silver like ribbons, dancing together in the air.

That line took my breath away. It's so beautiful... just, wow
and I kind of have an obsession with ribbons and dancing, so yeah.

You really should feel proud of this one. Everything was just... wow, you know.
I'm seriously at a loss of words.

The sexy part wasn't too, um... what's the word... plain or... dirty, I guess, for lack of a better word.
I'm glad it wasn't just about the sex and it was very well written.

I liked the ending also; I could imagine Frank leaving the boy in his broken hearted state.

ily.
<333

January 21st, 2008 at 06:41pm

fun ghoul fez. (100)

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That was freaking amazing.
I think the ending was really good, how Frank finally managed to just leave, and get over Gerard.
Plus the title definitly suited the story. So I loved it!

January 21st, 2008 at 02:13am