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  • SpootyEh

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    Wow.
    This story has me speechless.
    It's amazing.
    I really love it.
    March 2nd, 2008 at 03:21am
  • Jimmy Urine.

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    So that's why Frank wasn't at our show! *fist of fury*

    lmao.

    Dickhead.

    And change your fucking signature, Emilee, otherwise I'm gunna come punch you.

    Aww, undeserving Gerard gets out affection. Smiley

    Poor Frankie though ='[

    lmao. Jimmy...
    February 19th, 2008 at 10:55pm
  • Bert McCracken.

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    Mrs.Brightside:
    I loved it! =D

    Though the last line made me feel sad for Gerard I dont think he actually deserves it...mostly poor Frankie =((

    Final point: It was amazing!=D
    Yeah, the last part was supposed to make you feel sorry for Gerard.
    :tehe:
    February 9th, 2008 at 05:03pm
  • Mrs.Brightside

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    I loved it! =D

    Though the last line made me feel sad for Gerard I dont think he actually deserves it...mostly poor Frankie =((

    Final point: It was amazing!=D
    February 9th, 2008 at 01:53pm
  • ultraviolet;

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    This. Is seriously good.
    I love the lyrics expecially. Even if they're not strictly part of the story.
    February 4th, 2008 at 04:59pm
  • Raindrops on Roses

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    you are a fantastic writer. the imagery in this story is beautiful (and not the sex lol). you should continue it, so gee can get frankie back!
    January 23rd, 2008 at 05:38am
  • One.Of.God's.Mistake

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    That is amazing!
    January 21st, 2008 at 10:05pm
  • joutsenet.

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    ...as it captured his breath and turned it into a cloud of silver like ribbons, dancing together in the air.
    In Love

    That line took my breath away. It's so beautiful... just, wow
    and I kind of have an obsession with ribbons and dancing, so yeah.

    You really should feel proud of this one. Everything was just... wow, you know.
    I'm seriously at a loss of words.

    The sexy part wasn't too, um... what's the word... plain or... dirty, I guess, for lack of a better word.
    I'm glad it wasn't just about the sex and it was very well written.

    I liked the ending also; I could imagine Frank leaving the boy in his broken hearted state.

    ily.
    <333
    January 21st, 2008 at 06:41pm
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    That was freaking amazing.
    I think the ending was really good, how Frank finally managed to just leave, and get over Gerard.
    Plus the title definitly suited the story. So I loved it!
    January 21st, 2008 at 02:13am
  • Alice Verney

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    wow uts amazing especially how gerads keeps wrapping frank around his finger
    January 21st, 2008 at 12:12am
  • prescription

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    I like it, nothing to 'bad' crit./complain about, lmao <3
    *huggles story* (if thats possible...?)
    January 21st, 2008 at 12:01am
  • Bert McCracken.

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    New Frerard one shot.
    Set on the 11/11/07.
    Comments are great, but con crit is love.

    Enjoy!
    January 20th, 2008 at 11:43pm
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