Hell yes fist pump! I'm bringing that shit back yo. LOL just kidding. Kinda. I loved Star's outfit, too adorable. I wonder what kind of dancing is going to take place, and Zacky's reaction to it. That has got be good. =D I'm glad Zacky is dropping the dick act and going after his woman. Good boy Zacky, *pets hisbeautiful hair* Good boy. I can't wait for more to come! =D
Hell yes bitches I'm awesomeness! *Fist pump* Alrighty, I really liked this chapter. It seriously made me 'Awwwwww!' You're amazing. Cant wait for more! =D
All done! Check it! =D And another suggestion (I know, your thinking "Shut up already would ya?" LOL and l'm sorry, but l'm just trying to help so please don't kill me...metaphorically speaking...of course...l hope...XD) ok so anyway, l loved the city lights you had before, when l said alter the back ground that wasnt what l was talking about (sorry l was unclear) what l ment was have a back ground for the story area. ln my opinion it would look better with a solid color background (this is only for the story area). If you want l can make a layout and set it up for you. l've done that for somebody before and she ended up loving it. Let me know. =D PS- sorry for being so nit picky DX
Hehe she didnt even know them...classic. l cant wait for more to come!! PS- do you want me to pimp your story? Let me know and l'll add it to my signature. =D Peace out! XD
*Bursts comment cherry* I like your story so far. l like the idea behind it. But it was kind of hard to read. l had to double click (highlight) the text to read it clearly. So my only suggestion would be to alter the back ground so it's easier to read. Thanks for your time and l can't wait for more to come. =D *Subscribes*