Lights Out - Comments

I''m certianly intrigued with this story, and I actually am very interested in - can't remember his name now, blokey who beats her in maths and is "opposition". I think in the second chapter there is you miss out a word somewhere - can't remember where - and in the chapter about the lights going out the word "suddenly" is used twice in quite a short space of time and sounds slightly odd.
I do like this story though, even if my memory is failing me lol. I want to know what the plotline is!

I really like this one, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens. Ms Sanderson reminds me a little of Miss Thomas :)

xoxo, and update soon! :)

This seems like a really interesting story, I like your style of writing, it makes for an enjoyable read. I can't wait to see where you take this, update soon!