Again you have me speechless. So much emotion, pain, longing and fear in this. There was no reason for you to be nervous, you did Jimmy justice. I'm writing something now and his death was my biggest obstacle. Be proud of how you wrote this and most of all thanks for sharing it.
I don't know how I ever get through any of these types of stories... I always cry by the end. It makes me wanna cry for the guys, the girls, and the families... and then for me, because I honestly don't know what I'd do if I lost the person I'm in love with...it makes it too real to me, to know that we lost Jimmy when he was so young, and that could easily be any of us.
Oh my lord. That was so sad. And I agree with i_love_to_syn; I believe he knew, and I more than hope that he just fell asleep. I loved this one-shot, it was amazing. <3
Oh my gosh, Rhian. There are still tears running down my face. It doesn't help that I personally believe that Jimmy, somehow, knew it was his time to go. The way you wrote it, though, makes it seem not so bad. Like maybe, just maybe, it was as painless as falling asleep and being found by an angel.
I may have cried, but this was absolutely beautiful. Thank you.