This is amazing. Well written with a nice, unforeseen twist at the end. The middle was a little too cheesy for me, but it was supposed to be. I swear, I've read this over three times now ^^
I honestly have to agree with the person above me. I thought this was very well written and nicely adapted. What impressed me the most was how the setting of the story ever changed and I wasn't bored with your words and the characters. The love you represented here was beautiful beyond words...a type of love that's good to be true, but I adored it nonetheless.
Oh, Dasha. Where to start with my comment? Let's start with "fucking amazing." That about sums up this entire, wonderful, beautiful story. I was wondering exactly what she was doing in London, and why she was on the phone. And I was wondering about why her boyfriend wasnt' there. It all came together lovely, and I was nearly moved to tears by the end because of how cute they were together, and how much emotion there was. This is just such an amazing piece, like all of your work, and I definitely cannot wait to read what you have coming out of your talented little sleeve next.
January 9th, 2011 at 09:50am
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