Expression - Comments

You really know how to write beautiful.

Wonderful job as always, one of my top five favorites of yours for sure. I think you caught the feel, or mindset, of Kyo when he's performing. That is Kyo when he's performing and I think you did a good job portraying that part of his life.

Alright so this is actually pretty good in a twisted sort of way which isn't a bad thing honestly. It's just, like I said, twisted. It's really good at getting into the narrator's head which is always something that I look for. This isn't something that I would usually read, but it didn't disappointment either. It seemed a little rushed at times, but it also seemed that much better in all it's rushed nature. I don't think that it could have been written any other way quite honestly. So well done.

holy fuckbal;ls!! that was awesome!!!,you should turn that into a full blown story!!!