The funny thing about the way I set the lyrics up is that I didn't realize how well it worked out until I got to the line: "And with the way you’ve been talking every word gets you a step closer to Hell."
Poor Ryro. :( And i second what Nytestalker said: The way you set the lyrics up were genius. Have i mentioned that your layout catches me everytime? i love it. :3
I really like this. Ryan and Brendon are so cute. :P One thing though, I absolutely love the background, but the text kind of blends in with it and makes it hard to read. :( Maybe if you could possibly move it over a little more? i dunno, its not that big of a deal. it wont spot me from reading the story. :3 Update soon please!