Don't Let Them Find Us or We're Dead - Comments

I will stab you with a fork.
This needs a sequel.
You know it.
I know it.
The world knows it.
*cough*HINTHINTHINT*cough*

Please write more! It was so good. I love how clean your writing style is!

Please write more! It was so good. I love how clean your writing style is!

Loveee itt (:

Woop!
Loved it ;D

awe. !!
this was completely and utterly adorable and a half!
i love seeing those two together, because they seem to hate each other. XP
tis is jsut basically more than awesome. lol

I love Craig/Ronnie pairings!!!! :DDDD
PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE add more!!
Gah I love these!!!! :D :D :D ^_^

Please do add more!

The title was very eye-catching, and I really liked the way you related it to Craig's and Ronnie's situation. The imagery was good, not too complicated, but it gave me just enough info to see the scenery around them. I loved how Craig was done with hiding his love for Ronnie, and how Ronnie was okay with letting them be found. And I liked the way the title came back at the very end of the story. Very nice. <3 I really liked it.

And here we are to comment, darling. <3

We absolutely loved the title, as it is a line from our favorite ETF song, and we thought the pics you used for the banner were fabulous. We loved the story as a whole, and we loved how well you conveyed Craig's emotions, from the way he felt about Ronnie when he was younger and shy to the way he feels now. We were absolutely touched by it, and we love how Craig was still so gentle with Ronnie after laying down the ultimatum. We always knew Craigafer had a soul. . . <333

And we really liked how the title came back at the end, how Ronnie remembered it after all those years, and how he was willing to tell the world about his love so he wouldn't lose it. We love that Ronnie's matured enough to understand.

You should totally write one more chapter.

<333333

agh! i LOVED it!

i seriously love the way you used the lyric/title in the story...and brought the reader back to it at the end. that'd be hard for rons =\ craig, too, but craigs a little more open and seems to have accepted, if you will, his fate. the tenderness the reader ultimately feels for how real the relationship is really is what made this so amazing; you feel like they have to work out no matter what and youre almost gonna want to hopinto the screen and help them figure it out. that is, until they figure it out in the end all on their own..

really REALLY LOVED IT! =DDD and i would TOTALLY LOVE FOR YOU TO CONTINUE THIS O.O

ily bestieFIRlifeee <333

Molly Mental =]]