Catastrophic Happenings - Comments

update soon, please!

I like this alot:)
The layout is really pretty and it's different than most stuff I read on here....nice job:)
I cant wait to read more,i'm subscribing:)

I only read the first two chapters, but I'll probably read the rest later.

This was pretty good, you're writing is enjoyable and the characters are realistic, although I think you may make the main female character, (I'm sure I'll misspell it), come off as too strong.

Also, the layout is very bland, maybe try to add a banner or something?

Your first chapter was very good, I liked the humor and the sarcasm of it. She was probably just scamming him for the $8 wasn't she? lol. This seemed more realistic than most band stories so that's a good element to have. Your writing worked very well with this, good job!

First thoughts: I wish I had a mom that was that happy to see me, aha.

This confrontation was going down a path very different than the one he had pictured in his head.

I think I liked this line the best. It showed that not only will this story have some humor, but it is indeed, very realistic and relatable. I liked that. C: <33

I can tell just by reading this very first chapter that you've put a lot of effort into this. It's very detailed and the writing, though a tad choppy in a few parts, flows incredibly smoothly and nicely. I really enjoyed reading this. It was like getting this whole other taste of life - the crazy backyard rocker. :) Just kidding, hehe. I really did enjoy reading this. (: <333

Nice job. (:

P.S. Azalea, (I prolly misspelled that, aha) is a cute name. :)