Gimmie Kitty! - Comments

Sorry for being so late getting back to you with the swap. I really liked the layout, it was cute and went well with the story. The story itself was very good, really imaginative. I loved it. There were a few errors but nothing too major. Good job!

First of all I would like to say thank you for entering the contest.

This was an interesting read. I had never seen the movie, so some references kind of confused me, but I then contacted my friend who loves that movie and she told me This was an interesting way to take the song Teenage Dream and it made it feel more like a story with the fact that you had extended it. I saw very few errors but you had used a few wrong prepositions and confusing adjectives at some points, but nothing that drove me crazy.

Once again I would like to thank you for entering the contest and results will be up soon.