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  • niqqa

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    Whhoooaaah. You just used reverse physiology on our asses, didn't you?

    Anyway, this last chapter was really well written. The story may be a bit cliche, but hey, who ever said it was a bad thing? The writing is really good, and I quite enjoyed the read.

    I look forward to the update :)
    January 20th, 2011 at 02:10am
  • SexyDork17

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    awesome, and you do deserve comments! ur writing and that's the important thing:) Love this story, cant wait for an update (no pressure) ugh i hate 'no pressure' because then it applies pressure! okay so major pressure! does that equal no pressure? lol o well just cant wait more more but i'm not going anywhere so take your time:)

    xoxo
    <3Anita:D
    January 19th, 2011 at 02:23am
  • happster

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    lolwut?
    was it really that short?
    ohmigosh I'll have to start trying to write really long ones from now on.
    *gets you a new drink*
    thanks for the comments guise :D<3
    January 18th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • SpankMyFrank

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    I feel really stupid. There's a reason though!
    At the end of the page when you can't scroll down anymore, I kept trying to scroll down, and it wouldn't scroll down, so I lost my temper and knocked my drink over, then I realized I couldn't scroll down anymore.
    Yeah, I fail pretty hard.
    It's a great story though.
    January 18th, 2011 at 10:07pm
  • SexyDork17

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    badass story.. love love love it:) lol i say that alot:) but i do love stories i comment on! mkay cant wait for more

    xoxo
    <3Anita:D
    January 11th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • niqqa

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    Interesting. Don't quite know what to say.
    Update soon, wont you?
    January 11th, 2011 at 03:19am
  • S.C.A.R.E.C.R.O.W

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    Comment Comment Comment. Comment Comment Comment Comment Comment Comment Comment.

    Why do I keep doing that? Cuz I'm hoping those ^^^ suffice as enough comments for a double post. Cause I love this story. I love gerards unexplainable longing for Frankie and how Frankie is portrayed to be so innocent despite his alluded home life. Everything just flows so effortlessly and doesn't feel rushed. I love it. And btw: ur a fucking awesome writter whom I very much admire. :)

    CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!

    Xo Jen
    January 10th, 2011 at 11:36pm
  • stupid motherfu-

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    jdhbfgdljxhcgodfjxhgn
    You like my story?
    EILKDHFGDSJHIKDHSNGTJ
    THANK YOU SO MUCH. WE JUST NEED TO WAIT FOR MY CO-AUTHOR TO UPDATE ;3
    ANYWHO. I really liked Gerard's POV, I'm intrigued as to where this story is going. MORE.
    COMMENT PEOPLE, COMMENT LOTS SO WE GET TWO UPDATES IN ONE.
    If you don't comment...you don't want to know the consequences.
    I really liked Gerard's POV, and I wish for more. Moreeeeeeeeeeeeee.
    January 10th, 2011 at 06:48pm
  • S.C.A.R.E.C.R.O.W

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    Ooooh I really like this. I really likes the vagueness of the first chapter. It felt like a suicide note to rme. I hope I'm wrong. Poor Frankie. I already feel for him.

    Can't wait for the next installments. :).

    Xo jen
    January 10th, 2011 at 12:42am
  • happster

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    jgkhfnbtkghsbejt thankyou so much
    your story is like my favourite and just jdrngvnse
    I need to type up the second so I'll try and update tomorrow after school :D:D:D:D:D
    January 9th, 2011 at 06:30pm
  • stupid motherfu-

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    Excuse me but how are there no comments for this story.
    DUDE, I LIKE THIS, MORE. MORRRRRRRRRRRRE.
    The intro got my attention, and then when I finished reading the first chapter I was like; I NEED THE SECOND CHAPTER.
    Also...comment virginity stolen ;3
    ^ That aside, I really like this.
    January 9th, 2011 at 05:54pm
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