Layout is very nice and simple, yet clean. Love that fact.
The summary confused me a tad, but that's a good thing because it'll draw the readers in. So it works for the best.
I like how the first chapter is written for the sole fact that the description is not too heavy, it's gentle and just enough to give you an image, but weak enough to let you have an image of it yourself. Kudos on that. And I like Dan...not sure why, but I do...haha. The last line was like whoa to me.
The second chapter was interesting a flashback right...I am curious.
So I love the layout and the summary is really simple and teasing, but there is one thing that bothers me about it. a straight a straight...and I'm wondering what you meant by this.
The summary confused me a tad, but that's a good thing because it'll draw the readers in. So it works for the best.
I like how the first chapter is written for the sole fact that the description is not too heavy, it's gentle and just enough to give you an image, but weak enough to let you have an image of it yourself. Kudos on that. And I like Dan...not sure why, but I do...haha. The last line was like whoa to me.
The second chapter was interesting a flashback right...I am curious.