Silent Love - Comments

  • kili the dwarf

    kili the dwarf (300)

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    Layout is very nice and simple, yet clean. Love that fact.

    The summary confused me a tad, but that's a good thing because it'll draw the readers in. So it works for the best.

    I like how the first chapter is written for the sole fact that the description is not too heavy, it's gentle and just enough to give you an image, but weak enough to let you have an image of it yourself. Kudos on that. And I like Dan...not sure why, but I do...haha. The last line was like whoa to me.

    The second chapter was interesting a flashback right...I am curious.
    January 18th, 2011 at 04:18pm
  • Little Misfit;

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    First, I love, love, love the layout. :D Very pretty. (:
    Second, the summary is veryyy interesting. I like interesting storylines and such. ;)

    Update soon, please. 8D
    January 14th, 2011 at 02:02am
  • the redhead's cho

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    That is one heck of a teaser chapter. It makes me curious. Why in the world does she not want to talk? More please? That is what I want, more.
    January 12th, 2011 at 05:53pm
  • Allison-

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    I love it(: So what about this school is it like boarding school or something?
    January 12th, 2011 at 12:24am
  • the redhead's cho

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    So I love the layout and the summary is really simple and teasing, but there is one thing that bothers me about it. a straight a straight...and I'm wondering what you meant by this.
    January 9th, 2011 at 10:31pm