I'm happy that she gets a fresh start. In my opinion, I don't think their should be sequel. It would be better just to let the readers wonder instead of writing an entire story.
Good ending. I'm glad she's at peace in her life. And i'm glad she's ready to start a new life and leave it all behind. Very good story, very emotional and turbulent but amazing. I really liked it. Good Job,
theres no epilogue?? :( now why you doing that to me? haha, man. i'm sick, i just got the cold so im like 'ehhhhh' prob. like a zombie, but i hope i can get on facebook soon and we can chat again!!
That was a very emotional chapter. I really liked it i think you did an amazing job of showing how she was feeling when she was holding her baby and knowing that she wasn't going to get to keep that little girl. Good good Job. More soon?
I could really feel the emotion in this chapter. I felt like crying when they took the baby away. And I'm happy it's a girl! :) I can't wait to see what happens. You really have to update soon.
oh and with what dirtylittlerocker29 said, pregnant women can have coffee, my sister kept asking me to make mochas whenever she would come over and she was pregnant. haha, it was pretty funny trying to figure out if she can have the coffee or not!
both chapters were awesome. i'm so glad Jeremiah was cool and supportive instead of stupid and judging, because that would have sucked really bad. i'm also glad she found some good parents!!! They seem like really nice people and that dog was awesome!!! Idk...i think i'd want my baby to have siblings, but that's just me. She did a good thing. It had to have been very hard.
I'm not trying to be judgey or anything, but, the coffee thing, pregnant women can drink coffee in moderation and the only reason they can't have it is because of caffeine, so they can have decaf. It's just something that's bothered me, i'm not trying to be obnoxious.
This was a really good chapter!!! I'm so glad she's going out with Jeremiah, he seems like the nicest guy. And i'm sure he won't be upset about her being pregnant, i think she should tell him. I hope everything works out with him and she can have a good relationship!!! More soon? i loved it. :)
Well i'm glad she talked to Tom. i don't really see why he would call bitching about Clare being "broken" by Jenn putting the baby up for adoption. It's not Clare's baby. Stupid bitch. ugh. It's a really good story!!! More soon?
Awe, a wedding. :) They are married. that's so awesome. you always write such wonderful weddings. And it gave me some kind of inspiration, but that's a surprise. Very good update. I can't believe Tom and Clare. what a bunch of assholes. Jeremiah seems nice tho :D good job. More soon?
Aw, I got so caught up in the magic of this chapter. And I love the dresses you picked out. I also noticed you fixed the whole comma thing. Thanks for that. And can I punch Tom and Clare in the face? Pretty please? It'll only hurt a lot. I promise it won't be a light punch. Update soon?
There's always been one thing that bothers me about your stories. Almost every time you use dialog you always end it with a comma and it doesn't always need to. It's always bothered me........
Tessa is such a bitch. I'm glad Jennifer is going for adoption. It'll be better for everyone.