STOP MAKING ME CRY. Ahaha jk..I enjoy this so much that I don't even mind crying. B/c I cry at everyyything I read..soo. (: AH I FREAKING LOVE THIS. But I dont get why Cameron is sucha..dick..D:
That is the only Taylor Swift song I like. (: It's like the story of her life...ironic.;) WHY.IS.CAMERON.SO.MEAN.?! He needs to stop! I love this story...(:
Is swearing prohibited on this website? Cuz I need to scream... WHY IS CAMERON SUCH AN EFFING DOUCHE. (: There, no swearing. But w.h.a.t.h.a.p.p.e.n.e.d.?!
Wow. I just read all five chapters, and I'm hooked. You need to write more! I love how you have a different side of Cameron. You really captured what fame can do to a person, and how easily someone can change. I'm confused as to why Cameron can't give her his number, but I'm sure you will explain it next chapter. I'm subscribing! :)
A little constructive criticism: Try putting spaces between paragraphs! It breaks up the story, and it makes it easier to read. (:
So I just read the 5 chapters, and Cameron seems like a huge douchebag in this. Not that it's bad or anything, I actually really like it. This is amazing so far. :) I really want to see where this goes. Post more soon please :)
Awwh, I really liked it.(: I wonder why it's for the best that Cameron can't give her his number? Anyhoo, can't wait for the next chapter! PS I caught a error on ch.1 in the note Cameron wrote her. He said county and not country. (: