It Hurts a Bit - Comments

I like it bud, especially the second person narration you used throughout most of it. I did one like this a while back, they come out extra sad since they're true. :(

I love this. It's simple (and THANK YOU for not cluttering it up with a super clunky layout! [:) and yet it still has an essence to it that I love. You are a very good writer.

This story is absolutely amazing. Even though it's short, it has so much meaning. And emotion behind it. I'm speechless, because I honestly could never add to this in any way or form. It's just too perfect.

I can totally relate to this in every way. This totally sums up what I have been feeling a lot lately. You are a brave one.

This is just beautiful. Your writing style is clear but still hits home, and the simplicity of it adds something to it. Amazing work.

this is beautiful.

I wish everyone could just feel accepted no matter what they look like. You are who u feel u are inside. :)