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  • ThePensAreMightier

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    I loved the ending and I loved this story the whole way through it was pretty awesome!!
    March 16th, 2011 at 03:13pm
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    okay fave lines :
    This man would have raised a total meathead jock bent on winning at all costs and forget the collateral damage. Thank God Sidney turned out a lot like his mother.

    “And he deserves to be happy whether he wins or not.”

    There was no one to see us, no one to care if I was famous or rich.

    awwwww i loved it!!!
    so glad everything worked out between them! and the way Marc asked was just so cute and fitting!!
    so sad its over!! :(
    March 16th, 2011 at 12:32pm
  • Lacresha

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    sad it had to end. great story:)
    March 16th, 2011 at 12:15pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    This story was incredible! I don't think I've ever read anything better! The ending...I couldn't think of a more perfect way if I tried!
    March 16th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • awakeandunafraid!

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    ohmygodohmygodohmygod.
    the ending.
    THE ENDING.
    I am dead.
    SO. CUTE.
    <33333 amazing job!
    March 16th, 2011 at 07:36am
  • Star Angel

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    wow i love this will you let me know when you add another storie love this aww so good
    March 16th, 2011 at 07:34am
  • thinmintify

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    I screamed at marc's proposal.. possibly the best thing ever written(: I loved this story, you did an amazing job!
    March 16th, 2011 at 06:41am
  • xshanmarie21

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    wahhh i'm so sad its over already!
    but i loveddd ittt!!!! sequel sequel! i wanna hear about the wedding and babies! lots of babies :]
    March 16th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    ohmygosh i just squealed so loud at the proposal I'm surprised I didn't wake the whole house up lol. I loved this story! Great job!
    March 16th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • KayPx3

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    i loved this story it was sooooo great
    March 16th, 2011 at 06:07am
  • simplymexx

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    I really love this story! I'm not a fan of Crosby by any means, but I'm a sucker for this story! Can't wait for more to read :)
    March 15th, 2011 at 09:47pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    I love this story! Everything is happening so fast, but it's so romantic <3
    March 15th, 2011 at 01:10am
  • life.in.technicolor

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    Loved it! I'm glad Sid stuck up for Evie!!!
    March 13th, 2011 at 06:45am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    yay for Sidney for sticking up to his father about Evie. Great job. Loving this story. Keep it up =)
    March 13th, 2011 at 05:58am
  • KayPx3

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    hahaha i loved the last line
    March 13th, 2011 at 03:40am
  • dreamerforever

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    Oh so good!! Looking forward to more!
    March 13th, 2011 at 12:30am
  • Star Angel

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    love this i want more it is so so good
    March 13th, 2011 at 12:08am
  • laurenx007

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    Evie's lines at the end of the chapters are great!(: I love them. Good chapter!
    March 12th, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • kendra-rae

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    hahahaha love it <3
    It is such an amazing story, cannot wait for more :) :) :)
    March 12th, 2011 at 10:26pm
  • xbeccabee

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    This story is seriously amazing.

    I can't even begin to describe how much I love it.

    One thing I miss is towards the beginning of the story, the characters talked to themselves a lot. Like, when they battled their hormones or made jokes to themselves.

    But all criticism aside, I love this story!!
    March 12th, 2011 at 10:10pm
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