It's good, but you're really gonna have me read three books? AHHH!
December 7th, 2011 at 04:23am
A Mistake - Comments
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Rockin story! :)June 6th, 2011 at 03:27am
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Ahhhhh! Okay, so how am I just finding out about this story? When it's over? Now I have to go read the sequel! But anyway..... I loved this story!May 15th, 2011 at 05:49am
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This wiLl Be Short & Sweet.
I Love It.May 8th, 2011 at 01:38am -
First of all, I really like the summery. It revealed enough for a summery but not so much as to give the whole story away. I also like how the color of the font gets a little darker with each paragraph. I didn't like the font color when I clicked on the first chapter. Dark gray on black tends to make the content a little hard to read. I would suggest making the content color something lighter, like white.
I really like the first chapter. It really introduced the characters well considering I have never seen Lord of the Rings. I like the seriousness and small humor in the first chapter. From what I have read, I can tell that this story has the potential to become something great.January 13th, 2011 at 01:36am -
This was really different, then what I usually read, I don't really read things like this.
Number 1. I caught one error, the first word you put The it should be there There.
The layout is nice, it's not bad at all.
I liked the length of the first chapter, lol, it didn't make me cringe. I actually wanted to read it.
It was just a really good start, I liked how sweet and michievious Gandalf seemed.
Good job(:January 13th, 2011 at 01:34am
