Lie To Me - Comments

I seriously think this is the best one shot ive ever read!

this is far too amazing for words.
i just.... speechless

So. Fucking. Amazing. I can't believe she let it go on and he continued to let it go on day after day. That's some seriously fucked up shit. I really wish we knew for absolute sure whether or not they stay together and whether or not Oli decided not to continue being the biggest cunt face known to man and end things with her whore of a "best friend". I honestly don't see how you could live with yourself knowing that you're hurting someone you care deeply about. I know that I could never do that and if for some seriously fucked up reason that did happen I would die due to the overwhelming guilt. And then I would spend the rest of my life crying and regretting that decision. And obviously Tess doesn't care. Stupid, slutty bitch.

My friend, CharmedLuna told me about this and she was right! This was fucking amazing... I felt so bad for Annie. I seriously don't think I can go on day after day, knowing he's cheated and everytime he'd anwsered his phone its her asking for a fuck. Fuck Tessa and Oli but, Oli still has his good traits. Fuck him still. I can't believe he would even think about cheating on a sweet girl like Annie. My hearts literally stopped everytime Annie got those messages from Tessa on Oli's phone. That's so fucked up.

Man when Tessa came out of bathroom, I just knew that Oli was in there with her!!!!
That fucking bitch!!!! I hate her and she calls herself Annie best friend when she fucking Annie's boyfriend and in their own apartment too!!!!
Annie really should have confronted them when she found out that they sleeping together.
She set herself up when she chose to have Oli try to tell her the truth but he didn't and that ripped her heart apart.
But that doesn't excuse Oli for keep going back that whore and coming back home knowing full well that he is betraying Annie!!!!
I demand for a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

I stayed up to read this because I am a BMTH fan.
I've only liked ONE oliver sykes story, but this is
close to replacing that one story I read. The details were
so damn good. I felt Annie's pain, but I also wanted slap her silly.
It was wrong of her to keep it a secret, because it's true she was the one
who let him lie to her. Though I could understand how hard it was for
her to bring out the truth because then it would burst her bubble.
Man, I wouldn't forgive him. I would have confronted them and slap the bitches!
haha. This was very good :)

This is super awesome one shot, love the emotion like anger, confuse, sad you really mixed it up very well and the ending its just wow..

Sorry, totally forgot to comment on here. But this was absolutely sensational. You're writing is mature, and descriptive, and capturing, alluring, and emotional. All things that make for an amazing story. You're such a great author. Always love all your work :))

by far my favorite one-shot of all time(: you're writing is phenominal. i adore it & please, keep throwing out oli one-shots:D

Oh my gosh, I love how she was totally trying to make him feel guilty the whole time!
This was so fab.<3

I Got so emotional during this story!
I loved it so much!~
:)
Ahh! people need to read this! It's so good!
<3

So I loved the whole beginning of this. Just because I was like, “Oh my God I know Oli is in the bathroom with Tessa” and you totally made it believable that he wasn’t, so then I was all fucking confused. And then later when he goes in and has sex with her, I mean what a fucking pig. But I like how she totally dangles Oli in front of Tessa, because that’s exactly what that stupid cunt deserves. Although, I’m not sure I would be able to be in the same room with Oli, much less have sex with him if I knew that he was fucking my best friend. But that just makes her that must more emotionally stronger.

“She fit ‘nd stuff, but like those long spider legs ‘nd bright red lipstick is just… I dunno really. Would yer go for that?” He asked Tom turning to him.

HAHAHAHA oh my God. Totally lol’d when I read that.

And when they’re sitting on the couch and Annie gets herself a beer and doesn’t bother getting Oli one? That scene was so perfect, just because she was exhibiting her built up anger for him without actually telling him why. I really liked that part. It’s like being pissed off about something or at someone else and taking it out on a different person, or pretending it’s another reason.

I really hate Oli in this. Seriously. It really makes me mad how he tries making Annie feel bad when obviously he’s the one going around and cheating on her. I feel so bad for Annie and I want Oli to just fucking die. He’s such a prick.

;LDSKJF;OIADSJFSKLDF;OSIKAFHADSIOYHF;KSUDGH The end Sophie. The end. Oh my god I was like, YES FINALLY ANNIE IS GOING TO GROW SOME BALLS. And she didn’t! She’s just like la la la I’m sorry baby I love you.

Basically, this one shot was great. And I think I appreciate the ending even more because it wasn’t predictable. Sldakfjdfas. I love you

ooooohhhhh my gosh! i have to say, other than your writing style and your word usage/arrangement, i think what makes your writing so great is your unexpected and in a way inconclusive ends. like, the ending is always conclusive because you always know what happens right at the second but then you're like, "wait. whats gonna happen after? :O i want a sequel naooooo!" omg i loveeeee it :D i was so excited to read this hahaha amazing<33333

Amazing! Duh! It all came together really well, especially that last sentence. You hinted at that the whole time, and then she finally admitted it. They'd be cute together if they could work it out (:

You already know what I think about this!x <3