May 10th, 2011 at 07:41pm
To be honest, I don't follow hockey in the slightest, and I don't have any idea who the Sean and his teammates (and coach) are. I was worried that this would stop me from really enjoying the story, but it didn't.
I liked the flow and the character interaction, but I wish that each of the characters had a bit more depth. The ending also seemed to have been a bit rushed.
Regardless, I liked this. You did a good job. :]
Overall, it was very good!