Baby Doll - Comments

I love the new rewritten chapter you wrote for chapter 1-3.
Although the preface made me sad.. I hope that Stephanie will be okay and doesn't die.
I hope you be able to update soon..I really miss this story :D

Oooh nice one Steph!
And I hope Jason doesn't believe that she cheated on him.
Anyway, good luck with the rewrite!
Update soon!<3

I hope that Jason won't hate Stephanie after seeing that video on Matt's phone...he has to understand that wasn't Stephanie but one of her other personalities.
I seems that Stephanie is has injury Matt..hopefully she can escape from him.
I can't wait for the next update :D

She didn't know? Wow
That must've been like hell to find out that way
And why did Matt call Layla? What on heart is he planning?
Wanna see more!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS> can you include a link to the journal in the next chapter?
Update soon!<3

I think this might break Stephanie I mean she just found out that she lost a baby when she was a teenager. I wonder how Layla found Matt? Maybe it's Jason that accompany her to go confront Matt. Great update :) can't wait for the next one

Light!
Why is Matt such a demented bastard?
Why did Layla suddenly turn out of of nowhere?
Why does Stephanie keep ending up in these situations?
Why am I asking so many questions? =P
It's been so long!
You have alot of grammar and spelling mistakes, but you said you've started re-writing the chapters, so that'll be fixed. But... you keep switching between past and present tense.
Anyway, loving it.
Can't believe Steph lost a baby!
And I know it was either Desiree or another? of her alter egos who jumped Matt, so....
And I can't believe Matt freaking kidnapped her! Like WTH?
Update soon!<3

I happy that Stephanie isn't stood up to matt and isn't going to just be submissive to his order. She showing him that she still have some strength left.
Great update :)

Poor Jason..he's really crushed that Stephanie is gone and he doesn't know where she is or what's happening to her.
I hope that Stephanie is able to escape Matt. That's sad that when she was young that she lost a baby.
Great update :) I can't wait for the next one

I hope Stephanie can escape...

poor Stephanie :(
matt going to break her again, but she not going to let him.
Great update :)

I can't believe that Matt kidnapped Stephanie :O
i can't wait for the next one. Please update soon :)

Matt I thought you sneaking into her apartment on a regular basis was the epitome was creepy ex-boyfriend-ness, but you just proved me wrong.
You changed something into the previous chapter didn't you?
PS. You said 'integration' instead of 'interrogation'
Update soon!<3

Amazing update :)
i wonder how Stephanie got those bruises on the neck?? and who send destroyed the presents that she got from Jason.
I have a feeling that it might have been Matt.
I cant' wait for the next one

Aww that was a cute :D
I love the presents they gave each other.
Great update

I like that, for now, we're in the adorable 'young and in love' stage
Of course, it doesn't last, but let's enjoy it while it does, eh?
Update soon!<3

Phew.....I thought that was the end.
Idle people........have you nothing better to do than watch people making out in the streets?
Update soon!<3

I loved the part when you said "they're going to end together" but it was ruined by "something is gonna happen..." Can't wait to read the next chapter! =D

I'm so glad that Jason and her were able to work things out :)
Great update

100th comment! Hell yeah xD

Look who's so freaking chivalrous all of a sudden.
I love Jason, but he's starting to piss me off.
Grrr o.O
Update soon!<3