I love the new rewritten chapter you wrote for chapter 1-3. Although the preface made me sad.. I hope that Stephanie will be okay and doesn't die. I hope you be able to update soon..I really miss this story :D
I hope that Jason won't hate Stephanie after seeing that video on Matt's phone...he has to understand that wasn't Stephanie but one of her other personalities. I seems that Stephanie is has injury Matt..hopefully she can escape from him. I can't wait for the next update :D
She didn't know? Wow That must've been like hell to find out that way And why did Matt call Layla? What on heart is he planning? Wanna see more!!!!!!!!!!!! PS> can you include a link to the journal in the next chapter? Update soon!<3
I think this might break Stephanie I mean she just found out that she lost a baby when she was a teenager. I wonder how Layla found Matt? Maybe it's Jason that accompany her to go confront Matt. Great update :) can't wait for the next one
Light! Why is Matt such a demented bastard? Why did Layla suddenly turn out of of nowhere? Why does Stephanie keep ending up in these situations? Why am I asking so many questions? =P It's been so long! You have alot of grammar and spelling mistakes, but you said you've started re-writing the chapters, so that'll be fixed. But... you keep switching between past and present tense. Anyway, loving it. Can't believe Steph lost a baby! And I know it was either Desiree or another? of her alter egos who jumped Matt, so.... And I can't believe Matt freaking kidnapped her! Like WTH? Update soon!<3
I happy that Stephanie isn't stood up to matt and isn't going to just be submissive to his order. She showing him that she still have some strength left. Great update :)
Poor Jason..he's really crushed that Stephanie is gone and he doesn't know where she is or what's happening to her. I hope that Stephanie is able to escape Matt. That's sad that when she was young that she lost a baby. Great update :) I can't wait for the next one
Matt I thought you sneaking into her apartment on a regular basis was the epitome was creepy ex-boyfriend-ness, but you just proved me wrong. You changed something into the previous chapter didn't you? PS. You said 'integration' instead of 'interrogation' Update soon!<3
Amazing update :) i wonder how Stephanie got those bruises on the neck?? and who send destroyed the presents that she got from Jason. I have a feeling that it might have been Matt. I cant' wait for the next one
I loved the part when you said "they're going to end together" but it was ruined by "something is gonna happen..." Can't wait to read the next chapter! =D
Although the preface made me sad.. I hope that Stephanie will be okay and doesn't die.
I hope you be able to update soon..I really miss this story :D