Homepage › Stories › Baby Doll › Comments

Baby Doll - Comments

  • XtremeFairy

    XtremeFairy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    18
    Location:
    United States
    Oo so jason saw matt flirting with lexi :0
    great update :)
    March 10th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • lhyg

    lhyg (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    I really like this story! Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up :)
    March 7th, 2011 at 08:18am
  • Star Angel

    Star Angel (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    more this is so good i love this
    March 6th, 2011 at 06:05am
  • XtremeFairy

    XtremeFairy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    18
    Location:
    United States
    Who said that? Was its stephanie??
    Amazing update :)
    March 5th, 2011 at 08:03pm
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    OHHHHH!!!!!
    I was confused about the end, but then i remembered from the first story that Stephanie had an 'alter ego'?...........?
    Hmmm.........
    Update soon..
    March 5th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    Why do I have a bad feeling about that kiss?
    ^_^.......
    Update soon...please!
    March 5th, 2011 at 03:32am
  • XtremeFairy

    XtremeFairy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    18
    Location:
    United States
    Ugh.I can't believe matt cheated on her :/
    O ooshe kiss sam :0 I can't wait for the next one :)
    March 4th, 2011 at 05:33am
  • XtremeFairy

    XtremeFairy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    18
    Location:
    United States
    Amazing update :)
    February 17th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    Sweet update.........
    I wonder who the last POV was from?........
    Mystery.........hehehe

    Update soon
    February 17th, 2011 at 02:07am
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    Loved the update......it's sooo.......
    I'll tell ya when I think of a word.......
    Update soon
    February 13th, 2011 at 04:26pm
  • XtremeFairy

    XtremeFairy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    18
    Location:
    United States
    Great update :)
    February 11th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • XtremeFairy

    XtremeFairy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    18
    Location:
    United States
    Great update :)
    February 9th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    Matt should be haunted..........hmph
    Hope ya don't get the flu so you can update soon!
    February 9th, 2011 at 12:15am
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    Did you update and delete it? 'Cause Mibba said it updated......=(
    Plz update soon!
    February 5th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    Yeah.....omg
    he 'loves' her...........reeaallyyy wanna see hat she says

    Update soon!
    oh and thanks for the triple update =D
    February 1st, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    Okay....before I read 5 and 6, I just wanna say that you have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes and you keep putting 'where' instead of 'were'........
    Other than those, I love it so far!
    February 1st, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    oohhh....okay
    So they're goign to teh Blue Negligee? Why does she have to go? Does she have to strip ? =(
    Wanting to know what happens now.....so
    Update
    Soon!
    January 29th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    Sooo sad..........
    Jason likes her =).........Matt's being kinda nice....
    You've got quite a few mistakes, but I loved it anyway.

    Update soon!
    January 27th, 2011 at 12:20am
  • Unspoken_Lies

    Unspoken_Lies (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Grenada
    aww......=(
    You changed the timeline up to her....but I catch the flow
    Update soon
    January 22nd, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • teenlife

    teenlife (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    This is a really good story, some interesting details just try to go more into detail about her being scared and like hurting her, and his eyes filling with lust and im wanting to hear more
    January 22nd, 2011 at 03:12am
Homepage › Stories › Baby Doll › Comments