You should definitely continue!(: If you want more people to comment you could always say in the authors note that you need 3 more people to comment or you won't update.(: Or however many subscribers you have. That is what I do(:
This seems good so far! (: The only thing I have to say is you should capitalize the Like and Winter in Love Like Winter because it's a title and each word should be capitalized. People could report your story and get you banned if you don't. Just a heads up. ;)