and advice: you should edit this and mark it as completed as well as any other stories that are completed!(: Just a tip because people can report you for it (So I've heard). :P
Awwh, this was so sad. I was so close to crying. It was sad, which usually I love cheesy&happy endings. But it's okay because this was GREAT. I loved the detail! And there were no grammar mistakes whatsoever. The only thing that I caught, which I dunno if you would call it a grammar mistake, was ipod instead of iPod. But that's no big deal. Anyways, cute story and there better be some tough competition! ;)