The Worst Nightmare - Comments

I couldn't help but smirk as I realized what he meant.
Although there are enough Fans that i doubt such a thing would ever happen, but still, this is almost believable.
Well written, amazing job.

Ignore my silly comment.

I got so worried last night, Isa.

MCR didn't come onstage until a solid half hour - 45 minutes of no activity.

I was afraid this happened.

Gerard seemed upset about something. And it made me unable to get this story off my mind because it seemed so true to what happened (even though he actually showed up at this; I ignore the small details.).

Just thought I'd let you know. ♥

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Awwww Gerard.

I know you like writing sad stuff, Isa, but that really stole the cake.

Yes, I said stole the cake. :mrgreen:

I feel so bad for Mikey. Gerard's being an evilface to him.

...I need to go learn more words.

Oh God...... It's like...... OH MY GOD! This is... amazing, wow..... I fell in love with this story..... I think I need to read it again...... *10 minutes later* ...... Jesus, I think it's my favorite story ever..... It's better than books I ever read..... God, I love it!
Love xoxo

I read 'The Worst Nightmare'.

It really is the worst nightmare, loosing the faith instead of keeping it.

It's really terrible. You made it seem...so fucking unbearable, and that's exactly what it is!! I almost teared up, it was really heart-shattering. You're such a great writer, and you make writing seem so simple.

Your forte has always been writing disastrous or extremely sad situations, because you portray it so damn well. Here's my favourite part in the story:

''Then the moment passed, and he regained his composure. Mikey watched in horror as his big brother transformed before his eyes. So pale, so flawless, so together outside, but then, gone was the hero inside. His heart, blackened by flames of deceit and hatred, hardened into obsidian. Unsalvageable, too far back in the abyss to guarantee redemption.''

I just love love love the way you form sentences, with your words, it just captures you. And so sad. Soooo sad. I loved the last line especially. You've got talent, girl. I bet you knew that already though. :file:

The Worse Nightmare

O_O I can't really make a coherant review. For real. I just can't. It was amazing and beautiful and tragic and real. It was just real. I see this conversation happening. I see the horror, the fear, I just. I really can't make this review coherant. I think this was an amazing story.

I like how you made this different from the other KTF. In my opinion, and no offense to your project and the other writers, but they were becoming a little...redundant. This isn't. This is the same message, but a totally different delivery. I liked how you made Gerard change in this, I like how you made him react to this. And the repitition of the beginning in the final, the "you trust me right?" Was just...I can't just explain it. It was amazing. Just floored me. Amazing.

Then the corners of his lips curled in a sardonic grin.

Uhm! I think you know what I like this line so much :tehe: XD I love it, good job, Isa. <3

this is awesome.
im crying.
and...

thank god it isnt like that...

That was just... I'm speechless really. I can't think of anything intelligent to say because that one shot says it all. Like all beautiful things, it had a message. I'm not evening going to say it here in fear of getting it wrong in your eyes, but it made me think. It felt sort of like a rebellion against some people on this site starting "Mibba Wars" over Mr. Way's behavior. I liked how you did it here and not like some of those fools. Thanks for giving me something to read that wasn't complete b.s.

This is truly heart-breaking, Isa. It does appoint a great deal, though--when a hero is damned by his promulgators, he can easily make a comeback and turn against them. This impaled alot to me, considering most people are thinking of Gee as a different person and some egotistic demeanor in this world. But he won't be like this at all. Surely, he'll alWays love us, but that doesn't mean he couldn't stop himself from loving us I guess. This means alot. Gee will forever be with us in the end. Sure of it. :arms:

Guilt trip...
Because it reminded me of that day and that myspace page.
This really just made me break in tears.
This left me heartbroken & speechless.

Incredible, it's so real, sounds like it'll happen. He has a wife, and if Gerard loses faith , he'll always have a group of fans to catch him when he falls. I loved it.

Wow. I'm in total awe. That was stupendous. I envy your writing skills. Good job.

wow. you're a great writer.

That is definently the worst case scenario, yet it could in fact happen.

wow, just wow.

"Keep the Faith" , thanks for reminding everyone how important it is to believe in my chem, as much as they believe in us.

Oh my gosh.
The scary thing was, I actually imagined all that. I could imagine it happening. It scared the shit out of me.
How do you keep the faith in someone who doesn't keep the faith in themself? Isn't it the faith they have that draws us in in the first place?
You have got to get that book to them, Isa.

That was so sad...It's really weird...'Cause he might actually be feeling all of this...

:'[

Oh my God Isa.

For you to write something like that is amazing. Amazing.

You've left me speechless.

You... broke my heart.

:cheese: -falls off chair-

I’m not goning to pretend that I ain’t jealous. I’m jealous as hell. :wink: Once again you’ve written a fucking masterpiece and it makes me wish I had your talent.

It’s brilliant all the way through. From imagery to phrasing to choice of words. It had a fantastic structure, a together and clear plot, a great beginning and perfectly suiting end.

I personally find it impossible to pick a favourite part but from a poets viewpoint I’d had to say that I fell in love with this paragraph: ”He pushed open the back door, which opened to the side alley that didn't seem to connect to anything. Like a moment of eternity, floating in existence, a black hole where all the unsaid words and leftover promises of the world were kept, emotional and worthless and done.” And as a writer I’d say you continued in the most prefect way with the more casual tone of the next paragraph. You’re a genius, doll. :D

And just so you know; this one-shot made me grin. Now, it might seem like I’m incredible morbid or that I didn’t get the message. So let me explain. When I’m feeling bitter or down or feel that something is somehow disturbing I grin. I grin like a madman. I still come of as morbid, don’t I? Ah, well. But just so you know, this story had a similar affect on me as it had on the others who commented I presume. It’s just that I react backwards. Honestly. When I’m really, really happy or touched I cry. :roll: So yeah…[/ramble]

this
is
brilliant...

it's not my interpretation of the worst possible thing that could happen.. but you've more than conveyed just how much it does to you ...

the writing is impeccable and the matter is amazing ... i love how you don't go into extreme detail yet you manage to express everything at the same time...

brilliance...

Woah.
This made me cry.
This was very well written,and it scares me so much.
What if Gerard gives up in the future?
What if he doesn't believe that there are millions of people depending on him out there?
I sometimes wonder how long it will lst before he finally has enough of all the lies and gossip and shit that's out there about him.
Cause there's loads.
This story is just woah.
Really amazing.
Endless kisses and hugs to you my fellow Mibbian.
And keep this up,and keep the faith too...
xxxx
oLLie.