Deceitful Star - Comments

Okay, I totally understand if you want to shoot me right now. It took me forever to get around to this! I wasn't expecting a pile-up of essays and dance shows from school when I made up this deadline. Anyways...!

I love how open ended your ending was. It started out as this cute thing that was just so crazy like life and then near the end you get this cliffhanger (which I want to shake you for! I want to know what happened!)

Little grammatical thing: dialogue. Commas instead of periods at the end of dialogue unless you close your sentence with the dialogue bit. Exclamation, question marks, etc are all the same though.

I just can't get over how much I enjoyed reading this! It was such a great thing to delve into a little and you put the way you incorporated the picture was very awesome! Kinda the same thing I had in my head a bit!

I loved this story but I don't get what happens at the end? Is it done? Do you have a sequel planned?

Ahhhhh! I don't understand!!!! Is that the last part or are you writing more?!?!
I can't believe this story doesn't have ancomments. Ridiculous!