Life to Lifeless - Comments

Ofelia Loves You (100)

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Age:: 29
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It takes a lot to make me cry, but you have managed to.
You have talent, my friend.

February 26th, 2011 at 06:40am

imbalance (100)

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Age:: 27
Location:: Australia

Oh wow. That was really really REALLY amazing. I'm like nearly crying. :'( So sad.

February 6th, 2011 at 09:27am

over the rainbow (100)

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Age:: 30
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This was a great one-shot. I like how the plot is pretty similar to Law Abiding Citizen. It was well written, however it did have some minor typos and a few grammatical errors. But all in all, I loved it. (:

January 16th, 2011 at 03:43pm

HailMisery (100)

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Age:: 33
Location:: Aruba

It's so fucking heart breaking that he couldn't do shit to save his family... I tell you I would have hunted them down and kill those bastards slowly.... and then kill myself.

I loved it.... well written just some minor, fixable mistakes :D

Seriously it's Amazing

January 15th, 2011 at 05:33am

Gabbs.The.Arsonist (100)

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Oh. My. Jesus! I fucking loved this, boo! :D

January 15th, 2011 at 04:30am