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  • tempest.

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    I dare you to write at least one chapter without someone 'licking their lips'...Ha ha ha, it happens every single chapter about 7 times or more...and, I might be weird or something..but I've never seen anyone in my life lick their lips in the situations that these characters do. ;) xxxx- arlandria
    June 6th, 2011 at 02:48pm
  • xMy Heart Is A Fistx

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    AWWWW!!! XD LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
    June 6th, 2011 at 10:06am
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Awwww I absolutely loved this chapter! He is just way too cute with the kids. More soon, please?
    June 6th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • Star Angel

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    aww so good please add more soon
    June 6th, 2011 at 06:02am
  • cdas42121

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    SUPER cute chapter!
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Aww I'm so happy that Peyton pregnant xD Now her and Brian get to have their own bundle of joy soon.
    I'm so glad that they're still a happy family and everything is going well for them and the kids.
    I can't wait to see what Brian has planned for her...ooo maybe he's finally going to propose to her xDDD
    I can't wait.
    Amazing update
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:19am
  • burning bright.

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    Is that wedding bells I hear?
    ;D
    June 6th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • punkstar102

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    I can't wait to see what Brian has in store for her! I love this story and its development :) update soon.
    June 6th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • Hypemo_O

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    I love this story so much!! ^^ <3
    June 6th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    awwww! <3
    they're gonna be a happy little family now! :D
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    June 5th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • angy_something

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    But about the "you'll see" it got me thinking
    June 5th, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • angy_something

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    Aww this is soooooo cuuuute. She's preggo and theyre all happy.
    Love ya
    June 5th, 2011 at 11:14pm
  • a venom

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    loved it
    June 5th, 2011 at 08:43pm
  • shades of twilight

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    OMG. Imagining Bri smirking and saying, "You'll see" made me smile. I can't wait :)
    June 5th, 2011 at 07:25pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Ooh is he going to propose?
    The way that Brian interacts with the children is so incredible
    <3 Michele
    June 5th, 2011 at 06:20pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Cute one! Can't wait for more! <3
    June 5th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • AnnieArchie

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    Love it! I adore how you portray Michelle as a nice person in this story, so many others show her off as a complete bitch. Very respectful :)
    More please! <3
    June 5th, 2011 at 03:36am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Yay, Michelle appologized and now everything is dandy.
    And yes, kids can get very bratty a lot of the time.
    But hopefully they will find a good balance where Jayden knows that Payton is now someone that he has to take seriously.

    Great update.
    Loved it. :]
    June 4th, 2011 at 01:46pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    I loved this one! I really did. And I love how Michelle put things aside and said that to Payton. More soon, please?
    June 4th, 2011 at 05:07am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    it's good that Michelle's coming to terms with Brian moving on...
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    June 3rd, 2011 at 10:38pm
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