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  • Burning_Desire

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    Caleb makes me laugh. <3
    I love this.
    January 19th, 2011 at 01:54am
  • burning bright.

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    You know, even though I think that my sister crying over some dude dumping her is funny now, I'd probably be pissed about it in five years or so. My point being that Payton's reaction would be very similar to my own, although somehow I doubt that I'd be nearly as angry with Brian Haner, Jr. standing in front of me.
    January 18th, 2011 at 04:01am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    I'm already loving this story!!
    I've subscribed.
    Can't wait to read more!
    More soon please!!
    January 18th, 2011 at 02:04am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Amazing update :D
    January 17th, 2011 at 06:43pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Hahaha she really chewed out Brian didn't she? Wow I think that's the first time I read in a fanfictiont that the main girl was not nice to Brian (no wait your Girl Next Door story just came to mind X) I really want to see when there next meeting is going to be :)

    Great update, I really like this story so far!
    January 17th, 2011 at 12:20pm
  • Knife_called_lust

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    I really think this story has great potential! The only thing i dont agree with was the ' I was on the end of my period' bit. As an author I would steer clear of statements like that as they seem rather sexist. But! other than that I love this story to bits!
    January 17th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • angy_something

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    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh she saw Brian which was awesome
    January 17th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • a venom

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    can't wait to see what's going to happen next
    more soon?
    January 17th, 2011 at 01:01am
  • TokioHotel1018

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    I really like it. I love the first chapter and the bit of background info we got about her, and I kind of like her attitude. LOL. More please! Definately subscribing!
    January 17th, 2011 at 12:42am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Cute update!
    I'm sure Brian will be paying her a visit at her store!
    January 16th, 2011 at 10:46pm
  • cruciatus.

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    I loved seeing the way they met in a grocery store, and it made me smile when she was bitchy to him. Can't wait to see more. ^_^
    January 16th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • Cali4nia Lovin

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    hahahah silly Brian breaking her sister's heart
    January 16th, 2011 at 08:37pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    I love love love the start of the this story
    Please update soon!
    <3 Michele
    January 16th, 2011 at 06:05pm
  • Cali4nia Lovin

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    Subscribed :) I love it already!
    January 15th, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    interesting <3
    January 15th, 2011 at 02:49pm
  • XXCKExxMABXX

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    More More More please!
    January 14th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • a venom

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    can't wait for more of this one
    January 14th, 2011 at 11:04pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Interesting concept, and I like how its rolling so far. Man I can't wait to see where Brian gets placed in this adventure, and Caleb is so cute >____< lol

    Great update and I can't wait for more (;
    January 14th, 2011 at 10:27am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Really like this so far! <3
    January 14th, 2011 at 07:39am
  • xMy Heart Is A Fistx

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    Ooohh I think this is gonna be good!! X)
    January 14th, 2011 at 06:29am
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