Early Sunsets Over Monroeville - Comments

Oh, and I know you did My Chemical Romance, but could you tell me which song please?

I found the story very amusing at the begining and the way you wrote it just dragged me in. I like how you have a sense of foreboding and you can just tell she didn't make it. I also found the ending really sad, but realistic rather then them impossibly defeating the tons of zombies attacking. Besides I like sad endings. Also I like how you left it slightly hanging, although you can figure out what's going to happen. I also liked how you worked your way up to the present I found it very pleasant and almost like life was flashing before her eyes. You did a great job!

That was AMAZING!!! I loved it!

Wonderful!
I was initially attracted by my love...well more like obsession with zombies.
You did quite well with this.
I like the descriptions and the abrupt changes.
Wonderful job!
I really enjoyed it :)