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  • Under the Stars

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    Oh, and I know you did My Chemical Romance, but could you tell me which song please?
    July 7th, 2011 at 12:35am
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    I found the story very amusing at the begining and the way you wrote it just dragged me in. I like how you have a sense of foreboding and you can just tell she didn't make it. I also found the ending really sad, but realistic rather then them impossibly defeating the tons of zombies attacking. Besides I like sad endings. Also I like how you left it slightly hanging, although you can figure out what's going to happen. I also liked how you worked your way up to the present I found it very pleasant and almost like life was flashing before her eyes. You did a great job!
    July 7th, 2011 at 12:34am
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    That was AMAZING!!! I loved it!
    January 17th, 2011 at 12:02am
  • Wonderlandslost

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    Wonderful!
    I was initially attracted by my love...well more like obsession with zombies.
    You did quite well with this.
    I like the descriptions and the abrupt changes.
    Wonderful job!
    I really enjoyed it :)
    January 14th, 2011 at 11:22pm
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