OK your stories are amazing, but this... Seriously! It made me cry! I had never cried for a story before! It's absolutely amazing. Astounding. Marvelous. Brilliant.
taww i really love this story lol i read the whole thing and its amazing :D i really like how it all came together in the end and everything, great job ^_^
I just want to add that I agree with Nicole, Nytestalker, I just saw her comment right after I placed mine, everything she said hands down, haha xD But this actually reminded me of The Weeding Date with Debra Messing and Dermot Mulroney :)
Oh my God, I saw this before I could go to the sequel of Sugar, so I just had to read and it was so adorable and the ending was so amazing. I love it that you always give an awesome epilogue, getting them married with the possibility of starting a family or they're already there. And also fix every aspect of their life which is great.
I've actually read this before. It was the thing I've ever read from you and it remains on the top of my list of favorite stories. Why? Well, let me list just a few.
I like their backgrounds though I don't know much about Rhys I know enough to know that Danny had a legit reason to think he wouldn't like him like that... At least not yet. I like that Danny is a figure skater and I love how that ties into the story, especially at the end.
I like the way the story proceeds. Like, the concept of them having a home life and then Becky's wedding and the conflict. It's all spaced out perfectly and it reads really well. I wasn't confused at all and that's what makes you one of my favorite writers of all time.
I ant tell you how many times I wanted to punch Danny in the face for being clueless. It was so obvious that Rhys liked him the same way! How could he not see that? Plus he didn't let Rhys or Tom explain the sketch and that infuriated me.
But then Rhys came an made it all better. I love happy endings.
Overall this reminded me of the movie The Proposal (with Sandra Bullock. Ever seen it?) with the pretend relationship that turned into more...only, you know, better.
Okay I read it late last night but didn't really know what to say, not that now it's any better...okay it was a beautiful end! It made me cry yesterday but, it's okay...but I'm still sad that this story is finished...it was just one of my favourites, because of that perfect idea and so on, and now...it's finished...but it's okay, can't wait for the new story :))
that was so beautiful!! i loved it so much! im sad its over but that was the perfect end! and i still have your otehr stuff to look forward to reading :D
That.*sob*Was.*sob*So.*sob*Beautiful. *sobs some more* Okay*sniff* I'm good now. I loved that epilogue! It was so amazing! Really sad that it is over though. :( Oh well. Can't wait to cheek out your new story, that is if that story isn't Dear Tommy. In that case, I have already subscribed to it and that story is amazing!
There are no words to describe how perfect this story was. There really are none. So instead I'm just going to say I can't believe it's over, but I'm looking forward to reading your next story =]
FINALLY!!!!!!!! I'm so glad that they finally admitted that they love each other! It was so obvious. Update soon, want to know how they will end up! Sad that it is almost over.
Seriously! It made me cry! I had never cried for a story before!
It's absolutely amazing. Astounding. Marvelous. Brilliant.