I'm not sure what you should change in the story because I love every part of it. I think Zacky might do something to the doctors through. He can't put up with that forever. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!! Poor Zacky. At least everyone is trying to help him. The officers should just let them go. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree with chickenorawesomeness that was a cute but also very depressing chapter,, i loved the vivid details that you give i9n your chapters they always make me more intrigued in what is going on. I rarely sit and read cause i never have time but I would read this story any day where ever i am :) More updates please!! x]
That was a depressing, but cute chapter. I had to read the last paragraph a few times before I understood what was going on. That's creepy. That was a great update! I loved it, but then again I love all your updates, so this one was a different type of love. If that makes any sense, probably not, but we'll pretend it does. Update! 'Cause I made you a smiley face:) <-- see
CAGED IS THE BEST! i seriously cant stop reading it! I cant seem to put my phone down because it is so addicting! I say phone cause you and i both no i dont have a computer. :) I love your fanfics april! cant wait for more on this story! Please please please please update soon! If not no more mr. nice gnome xD Nah ill just probably come over to your house and bug you until you update. :) Again cant wait for more! love you always -Gnomie :)<3
I didn't expect that, but I guess now that you think about it. It was planned out carefully and hidden in the text. Poor Zacky. He doesn't deserve to be tortured because he's different. I can't wait for more!
Aw why thank you so much! That means so much:) that was a great update! I had to find a way to read in class. I don't know what I can say about it cause their was so much raw emotion in the chapter. Which is why I loved! Can't wait for more:)[< that's a person
Omg I wonder how Matt and Jimmy will act if/when they find out Brian and Zacky did that under the blanket right in front of them xD Really good story, great plotline so far and addicting writing style!
YAY THEY DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aww it was cute how brian cared for him and for someone who didn't know what he was doing he sure did a good job to zack. can't wait for more