I've only read the first chapter so far. I don't have regular access to the internet but I will keep reading as often as I can. My only criticism is grammar. I have the same problem with overusing commas. In fact reading some of my old stories is a little painful with all the misuses of it. I really like the plot so far and you use very colorful ways to describe the scene; simple, yet fresh and new. I will keep reading as often as I can. I'm moving into my dorm room in about two weeks and then I'll have the internet so I'll continue reading then.
DAMMIT JOKER. ASDFGHJKLGK. YOU CAN'T KEEP RUINING PEOPLE'S LIVES LIKE THIS.
Bruce loves her? Woooah. I mean, I assumed he kinda liked her, but ahh! That part was cute/sad with him and Alfred.
Oh no, please tell me she isn't going to kill herself. BATMAN, YOU GET YOUR MASKED BUTT TO HER NAO PLZ.
Wonderful update, can't wait to see how this all ties up. Spot-on characterization with the Joker guys. //clapclap. I just, I just love this story. <33
Okay, first off, I lovedlovedloved the way you described the Joker as a beast in the beginning. Those first few paragraphs gave me chills and they were just incredibly well written, much like the rest of this.
Oh my gosh, I cannot even wait for the rest of this. I simply can't. You guys (cause now I'm almost positive there are two of you, lmao.) are BRILLIANT.
Poor Nora, :( Batman better get in there with his sexy butt. ;) But yeah, I'm scared for Nora and her friend, but also excited and just aslfhggah. <3
To quote a cartoon Joker from one of the many Batman shows out there.
"I love this show!"
Seriously I do! This is great! Like some others have been saying it is hard to find a good Batman story. Even on fanfiction.net [or is it dot com. No idea....too forgetfulXD] Can't wait till the next update!
NORA WHAT ARE YOU THINKING!? STOP GOING PLACES BY YOURSELF. Sigh.
(I love you too.)
OMG. Joker, you naughty boy, always kidnapping and talking about your scars. :) Marvelous update, I liked how you ended it when one of the Joker's more famous quotes. ONLY FOUR MORE!? I demand, like, eighty thousand. Lmao. This is seriously the best written Batman/Joker story I've ever read. And the most original. I just...*bows* I praise you. Hahaha. UNTIL NEXT TIME!