I absolutely love this story so far! You have such a nice way of writing and I like how you're incorporating the song lyrics. Most songfics I've read kind of randomly insert lyrics that are hardly relevant, so I've really enjoyed how you've written Vic coming up with the lyrics as he recalls specific memories. The plot is very emotional and you've written it well. I also like how you're incorporating the present and the past and making sure the whole band is included even though this is a Vic-centric story. And, the scenes in the past that you're writing are all relevant and there's no pointless filler, which is great. You're one of the best authors I've found on Mibba, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!