The Rose House - Comments

kiram (100)

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great story hope you write more!

March 22nd, 2011 at 01:33am

I_like_to_write (100)

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oh I thought it was spelt wrong...my bad :p
-LTW

February 21st, 2011 at 10:19pm

Psychosentinel (100)

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You are very welcome :)
lol and what did you spell wrong there?
you spelt grateful and amazing right e,e

February 18th, 2011 at 04:28am

I_like_to_write (100)

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Thanks for the comment I'm going to change a lot of this though except not the base of the story which is Rose House. I will definatly change my punctuation...or if someone AMAZING would edit it for me I'd be so grateful (yeah thats spelt wrong...) my punctuation isn't great I just wanted to post it to see if anyone thought it was a good idea. I'll probably go back after finishing it and fix the grammer and loop holes that are sure to exist.
But I'm gonna fix some stuff including that sentence you mentioned.
-LTW
Thanks again for the comment!

January 29th, 2011 at 10:53pm

Psychosentinel (100)

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This is a pretty good idea
although you may want to fix your punctuation
and one line:
Instead of climbing into the backseat with my...
i think it's supposed to say me ;)
good idea though

January 28th, 2011 at 08:19pm